Audience feedback:

• We have conveyed an emotive feel towards the audience since the last rough cut we showed to the class (we didn't entice the audience).
• Improvements: Our title name 'Years Later' looked a bit out of place and did not fit to the conventions of our film, they suggested for us to include a transition and to change the font to a more serious looking slim typography to suit the film, since it looked similar to an animated version.
• We were advised to include a time reference to make it clearer to the audience (to include a specific time frame and also needed to look smaller).
• Teachers comments: 

1. Music is emotive.
2. Ident sound needs to be unique.
3. Some shots are moving when should be cutting.
4. Pan needs to be cut since the camera movement wasn't stable.
5. Mise-en-scene: the grave we used to shoot it was very old and in our film the actor had just died recently so it doesn't really fit.
6. Good voiceover.
7. Dialogue: quiet although you are able to hear it.