Evaluation Rough Cut 2

When showing our second rough cut to the class, we got the feedback that our opening had massively changed for the better as we had re-filmed certain scenes which were previously shakey such as the graveyard scene and this ensured that the scences were stable in order to make sure the audience do not get distracted by the footage been shakey. In addition we also added several layer of sounds such as a piano piece called experience which we got from a copy-right free website which the audience seemed to enjoy as it was said to have evoked emotion and create the mood and atmosphere of sadness.  We also added a layer of a voice-over in order to allow the audeince to understand to what is going on in the story and to create empthaty towards the main character over what has happened with her bestfriend. However we got the feedback that we needed to adust our sound as at times we can't hear what some of the dialogue is as the music is a bit too loud. Futhermore we also need to change the sound in our ident as we currently have the same sound for the distibution company and production company. Our next step now is to add titles in to our opening and personally I would like to finalise the sound and colour adjustment.